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3。“两者选一”观点的议论文模式
模式1:a、b两者优劣势分析,要么选a,要么选b。
introduction
第1段:somepeopleholdtheopinionthat(a)issuperiorto(b)inmanyways。others,however,arguethat(b)ismuchbetter。personally,iwouldprefer(a)becauseithink(a)hasmoreadvantages。
mainbody
第2段:therearemanyreasonswhyiprefer(a)。themainreasonisthatanotherreasonisthat(赞同a的原因)
第3段:ofcourse,choosing(b)alsohasadvantagestosomeextent,(列出12个b的优势)
conclusion
第4段:butifallthesefactorsareconsidered,(a)ismuchbetterthan(b)。fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayfinallydrawtheconclusionthat(总结观点)
例文:whichisbetter?carsorbikes?
somepeopleholdtheopinionthatprivatecarsaresuperiortobicyclesinmanyways。others,however,arguethatthebicycleismuchbetter。personally,iwouldprefertheuseofcarsbecauseithinkcarshavemoreadvantages。
therearemanyreasonswhyiprefercars。themainreasonisthatcarsbringco女enienceandmobilitytotheowners。what’smore,acarisfarmorecomfortabletotravelin,especiallyinthechangeableweather。anotherreasonisthat,whenmorepeoplebuycars,theautomobileindustrywilldevelopmorequickly。thegrowthoftheautomobileindustrycanmotivatetheriseofotherrelatedindustriessuchasironandsteelproduction。
ofcourse,bicyclescantakeyoutoanywhereyoulikeintownanddoesnotneedalargeparkingplace。besides,itisnotasexpensiveasacarandthereforeeveryfamilycanaffordtobuy。
butifallthesefactorsareconsidered,carsaremuchbetterthanbicycles。fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayfinallydrawtheconclusionthatpeoplecanlivebetterwiththeuseofcars。
模式2:a、b优势相当,依情况而定,有条件地选择a或b。
introduction
第1段:whichwouldyoupreferifyouarefacedwiththechoicebetween(a)and(b)?beforeyoumakethedecision,youhadbettermakeaclosecomparison。
mainbody
第2段:itistruethat(选择a的优势之一)。itisalsotruethat(选择a的优势之二)。but(选择a的劣势)。
第3段:though。(选择b的劣势),(选择b的优势之一)。furthermore,(选择b的优势之二)。
conclusion
第4段:therefore,ifyou,youshouldchoose(a),butifyou,youshouldchoose(b)。(总结观点,提出建议)
例文:listeningtotheradioorreadingthenewspapers?
whichwouldyoupreferifyouarefacedwiththechoicebetweenlisteningtotheradioandreadingthenewspapers?beforeyoumakethedecision,youhadbettermakeaclosecomparison。
itistruethatlisteningtotheradioisquickandco女enient。itisalsotruethatwecanlistentotheradiowhilearedoingsomethingelse。sowecansavealotoftime。butradioprogramshavetheirowntimeschedule。youcannotgettheinformationyouneedeverytimeyouturnonyourradio。
thoughnewspapersarenotasquickasradio,readingfromthenewspapercancertainlybringusnewsmoreclearlyandmoreexactly。furthermore,whilereading,wehavetimetothinkaboutwhatwearereading,tojudgeit,toanalyzeit,andthenwewillbemoreawareofitscauseandeffect。
wearelivinginaninformationage。wehavetomakefulluseoftheinformationwecangetifwearetoachieveourgoals。
therefore,ifwewanttogetthelatestnews,wecanlistentotheradio,butifwewanttogettheexactwords,we’dbetterreadthenewspaper。
写作练习:
1健康与财富(healthandwealth)
提示:健康与财富哪个更重要一直是一个热门话题(hottopic),请简述你的观点。
2哪里住更好(wheretolive?)
提示:有的人喜欢往城里挤,有的人喜欢往乡下搬。各有所好,孰是孰非,你以为如何?
参考文献:
1。oxfordenglishforseniorhighschoolstudents(shanghaiedition),oxforduniversitypress,1996。
2。王长喜十二句法,王长喜,北京:中国社会出版社,xx。7
3。英语高分指导。写作。高中卷,郭凤高,第二版,上海:上海交通大学出版社,xx
4。高考英语作文直通车,曹越宇,上海:上海社会科学院出版社,xx
附录(appendix):
一、写作常用逻辑衔接词
根据衔接词本身在文章中所起的作用,主要分为以下四类,即“起”“承”“转”“合”。
1。表示“起”的常用词语。用于开篇引出扩展句。
atfirst
atpresent
currently
first(ly)
inthebeginning
tobeginwith
firstofall
inthefirstplace
lately
tostartwith
now
2。有关“承”的常用词语。用来承接上文,表递进。
after/afterthat/afterwards
afterafewdays
afterawhile
also/too
atanyrate
atthesametime
besides
furthermore
inaddition
inadditionto
infact
inotherwords
inparticular
particularly
inthesameway
incidentally
indeed
meanwhile
moreover
nodoubt
obviously
ofcourse
3。有关“转”的常用词语。用来表示不同或相反的意思。
afteralleventhough
allthetimenevertheless
anywaynonetheless
atthesametimestill
co女erselyinfact
in/bycontrastasamatteroffact
despiteespecially
fortunatelyhowever
inspiteofluckily
though/althoughnodoubt
onthecontraryotherwise
unfortunatelyunlike
whereasyet
4。有关“合”的常用词语。用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容。
aboveallinsum
accordinglyinsummary
asaconsequenceonthewhole
asaresulttherefore
ashasbeennotedthus
asihavesaidtospeakfrankly
atlasttosumup
atlengthtosummarize
brieflysurely
bydoingsotoconclude
consequentlynodoubt
eventuallyundoubtedly
finallydoubtless
hencetruly
inbriefso
inconclusionobviously
inshortcertainly
allinall